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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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» Abduction to Elfland: Part 2 (7-12)
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» Abduction to Elfland: Part 1 (1-6)
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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeOctober 1st 2008, 4:19 pm

Sometimes you just have to laugh it off.

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeOctober 2nd 2008, 1:32 am

Once, since it was raining, i decided to go skinny dipping with friends.

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeOctober 2nd 2008, 9:13 pm

The truest intentions can be mistaken for nagging, and honestly I don’t care if you can’t tell the difference, my friend.

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeOctober 3rd 2008, 1:08 pm

the water raced past me as i waded chest high in the river. my chin brushing the top of the rushing liquid. i had to make it across, i had to.

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeOctober 9th 2008, 3:56 pm

Sometimes you just have to take the bad with the good. I mean he could have been cheating with the ugliest girl you'd ever seen and what's that say about you?

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeOctober 21st 2008, 4:33 pm

The only thing that boggles my mind is trying to figure out how it goes after the dead.

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeApril 22nd 2009, 3:19 pm

Describing my life is like a volcano getting ready to erupt into a thousand curse words a lot of people never even knew existed.

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeApril 22nd 2009, 5:52 pm

time had changed him in as much as he was older now of course, but he also seemed more distant, as if something, if not everything that he had known, or even perhaps believed in at one point, had left him until this, a strained wisdom or sly disillusionment could be read into his slow stare upon the knife's blade

slowly, he pressed the sharp blade upon the skin a bit below the elbow, and waited without as yet cutting, nor any sudden motion for that matter, just the hot bathwater, his nakedness, and the sensation of floating in the tub, all lent to this moment of self sacrifice he knew, only....
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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeSeptember 23rd 2009, 6:29 pm

Only to realize he was a damned fool to think that he should end his life this way. He had a lover that loved him beyond the measure of one's heart. He had a daughter that needed guidance especially now that she was entering her teen years and she was developing like a roll of film. He put the blade down, got dressed, went out and checked himself into the hospital for help.

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PostSubject: Re: The Finisher   The Finisher - Page 3 Icon_minitimeMarch 3rd 2010, 4:02 pm

How dare they call that four-legged animal with horns their dinner.

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