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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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GinnyK

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PostSubject: Three P.M.   Three P.M. Icon_minitimeJuly 30th 2008, 12:17 pm

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Handsome gentleman
steps from a silver jet -
poses, a Jacquard jacket
off shoulder,
in hand a red rose

Patiently peers for the
peeress from past

Promises to meet
front the Irish Pub
at Three P.M.

Burnished red hair,
face-freckled,
hazel eyes,
dress of Kelly green &
a yellow rose in hand

Time stands still -
affixed gazes gather,
White hair now, eyes asparkle
and lentigines, but

Fifty years, at last
Brother, sister
together again, today
front the Irish Pub -
Three P.M. -
a red, a yellow rose
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PostSubject: Re: Three P.M.   Three P.M. Icon_minitimeAugust 7th 2008, 10:01 am

Your poem is very nice. It doesn't reveal everything and leaves room for the reader to for interpreation, identification and fantasy.
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PostSubject: Reply   Three P.M. Icon_minitimeAugust 7th 2008, 2:49 pm

It is different. There does seem to be a spart of meaning there. The words do seem to work, so I will give you credit.
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PostSubject: Re: Three P.M.   Three P.M. Icon_minitimeAugust 10th 2008, 4:00 pm

I like it, as the writer you can leave the piece open for interpretation but I would like to give some hint to what I want the reader to believe. Isn't that the point of writing?
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