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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: uncle john   uncle john Icon_minitimeMay 31st 2011, 1:44 pm

Uncle John

My uncle John came to visit me, at a farm I was sent to when mother
had go to a sanatorium far way. He knew the farmer couple and stayed
for a week helping out . It was his summer holiday and he had to go
back to work at the fish factory in the town.
I loved my uncle he was strong and told stories, in the evening, from
his life as an adventurer in Africa and America. I knew the tales were
not true, but I liked to hear them anyway.
The day he had to leave, on the afternoon bus, I fled to the outer fields
where sheep grazed, sat behind a stone hedge and thought life was sad.
He knew why I was hiding and came up to me spoke and ruffled my hair,
promised to come next year if things went well. I saw him board the bus
I waved, he waved back and life continued as it must.
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