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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Tears I Cry   Tears I Cry Icon_minitimeJuly 26th 2008, 5:08 pm

Tears I cry
fall down my face
cleansing my eyes
as lubrication takes place

Tears I cry
release sorrow and pain
cleansing my soul
of negative drain

Tears I cry
consist of happiness and joy
displaying elation
something I enjoy

Tears I cry
tackle onion vapors
washing away the irritation
destroying particle infestation

Tears I cry
I wipe away
knowing they will be back oneday Sad



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PostSubject: Re: Tears I Cry   Tears I Cry Icon_minitimeJuly 26th 2008, 5:10 pm

Oh i must cry ;( Your rhymes are so great

Very nice work
Wish you the best

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PostSubject: Re: Tears I Cry   Tears I Cry Icon_minitimeJuly 27th 2008, 1:01 am

Very nice. You are great at capturing the emotion and writing about it. The third verse breaks a bit in reading because of the double rhyme of joy but its still a great piece. Nice job! Lets see more.
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PostSubject: Reply   Tears I Cry Icon_minitimeJuly 27th 2008, 9:06 am

This one was funny. I like rhyming ones, so I had to give you a point there. Using words like lubrication throws off the cadence, but the audacity of simply using such a word in a poem is appealing. You did it a few more times, and I found that they set the mood of the poem very well. You were not being serious with well chosen couplets, but light-hearted and slightly defiant. I chuckled while reading it. Thanks for sharing.
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