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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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GinnyK

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PostSubject: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 10:08 am

A dash of lightning, peppering
rain, an entree
of thunderstorms

Colossal crown-like
rainbow arches
over lazuline sea

Vessels sound-alerts
As heavens darken
by-the-by

White caps
reverberating
abow

Pinto skies
dangle opalescent
coral gems
downward as

Mantaray drift
toward tepid
tranquil waves,
embracing
eventide

Moon, stars
appear and linger,
await the aura
of nighttime nobility

A sweet dessert -
spattered with
celestial
peace

Tempest
now tamed
Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 1:49 pm

Hey i find this one very nice Smile
I want more poems from you
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 2:09 pm

Shapira:

Thank you so much for the lovely comment. I am so glad you enjoyed my work. You will be seeing a lot in the future. flower
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 2:16 pm

Oh that is great :9
I am happy now ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 4:56 pm

Nice play on words.
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 7:25 pm

Hydra:

Thank you. I took a look at your site. Very interesting.

Ginny
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 11:09 pm

GinnyK wrote:
Hydra:

Thank you. I took a look at your site. Very interesting.

Ginny

I've always said, if I can't be good I'll be interesting. bounce
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 26th 2008, 8:43 am

Hydra

Being good can be very boring at times, so interesting can be a good (and fun) thing.. lol!
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 26th 2008, 10:54 am

I like the imagery, haven't seen this type of piece in a while. It is very refreshing. Thank you for posting it and keep up the good work!
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 26th 2008, 11:58 am

KC

Thank you for reading and commenting. I am so glad you enjoyed the piece.

Ginny
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PostSubject: Re: Seasonings   Seasonings Icon_minitimeJuly 26th 2008, 3:48 pm

No problem Wink
I love every poem. I thinks it gives no bad poems..
Every poem have something special

The only problem: You must find it Wink
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