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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Registration date : 2008-07-17

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PostSubject: True Love....   True Love.... Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:37 am

As I stay here gazing out the window
Instead of working I'm daydreaming of you
and wondering if you're in your own dream world
you're dreaming of me too

And now, I’m starting to feel that warmth inside
Like nothing or no one else can make me feel
Butterflies, a constant smile, happy thoughts
Looking forward to this year and think:

How fortunate we are
that we have found the love so true
that everyone dreams about
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PostSubject: Re: True Love....   True Love.... Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 11:10 pm

This seems more like a journal entry then a poem. I often write like this. What I was feeling at that moment is probably close to what you were feeling. This one draws others to you. Nice write.

(I don't think its a poem though. To me it has the feeling that you are 'working' through your feelings.)
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