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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: at the dentist   at the dentist Icon_minitimeApril 28th 2010, 2:39 pm

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A man I knew in Norway, a quarreler, sent me an email I have no idea why, telling me
he was going to live in Peru In a dale by a lake, away from endless arguments and strife.
As he stood fishing, by the lake of his dream, a sheet of ice fell from the mountain and
into the lake creating an enormous tsunami. It obliterated him and the village behind
him.“What the fuck is this?” may have been his last words. I was thinking of this as
I sat in the dentist’s waiting room the door to the street was open and tiny flies circled
around in the middle of the room, often touching each other as they were kissing in
a coy manner, like an Iranian couple, kissing at a public place and risk being hanged if
reported by the morality police. Flies have no teeth, so what were they doing here?
But they didn’t bother us who sat there waiting. Plenty of colourful magazines to read
about famous people going to parties, about their love life and they were all trivially
happy; they had white teeth too. My wife came out of surgery, new teeth but spitting
blood, I drove her to a pharmacy, then bought readymade soup at grocers. At home
I wondered where the affable dipterous flew when the dentist shut?
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