TerishD
Number of posts : 1441 Age : 64 Location : Ringgold, Louisiana Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-21
| Subject: The Bard's Clue July 23rd 2008, 12:27 am | |
| I liked poetry, until I started speaking with poets. Let me simply say that I like semi-silly rhyming poetry, and most poets like weird dry non-rhyming stuff. Anyway, Saphira said that this was poetry, so I am sharing.
Oh flimsy gin _____I dare not grin __________The portrait was thrown in the mire Twice I told _____The wolf so bold __________That I would not in white expire
The ice did bleed _____As I stood to read __________The stockings washed in lilies red Tumbling into town _____She did not yet drown __________Kicking the wolf with my head
Oh flimsy gin _____I still won't grin __________Though the wolf is in the mire Up below did I see _____The portrait of me __________I'm not in white so I might expire
I can explain it, but that takes all the poetic fun out of it. If you find enjoyment in it, I will feel good. Will I do this often, no. However, when it happens again, I might share again. | |
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Saphira
Number of posts : 124 Age : 35 Location : Münster, Germany Registration date : 2008-07-18
| Subject: Re: The Bard's Clue July 23rd 2008, 4:38 am | |
| Hey i have one question: Can you write more poems ? I like it and i want to read more. I hope you say yes | |
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