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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Number of posts : 818
Age : 39
Location : Stuck in Michigan
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Registration date : 2008-07-17

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PostSubject: Female Messenger of Love   Female Messenger of Love Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 3:36 am

The female messenger of love
Born in heaven
At home in the sky
Hand of god's

Beautiful and innocent
How you can see her
Flying through the nightly sky
Full of brightly shining stars

She found the way to me
And whispered in my ear:
I give you the whole world
The one just for you

I often thought about these words
But couldn't find the fitting piece
Until to a certain day
The day I met you

It was as if I had known you for years
like my soul mate from a life before
You amazed me from the first moment on
And you're still doing it

One look into your eyes
And the sun is shining
When I hear your voice
It's a melody of love

Now I know what the female messenger of love meant
I got the whole world
The one just for me
And that is you!
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Age : 46
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Registration date : 2008-07-17

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PostSubject: Re: Female Messenger of Love   Female Messenger of Love Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 11:08 pm

I love your freestyle pieces the best because it shows how you connect with your audience by telling your own story. You make other poets want to keep writing, its therapeutic and refreshing. I love you
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