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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: the legend   the legend Icon_minitimeMarch 25th 2010, 8:14 am

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Where the track narrows and overhanging trees makes it spooky
I usually hesitate, there is here a profound melancholy on seen
in the eyes of reformed drunks. I hear a rider coming up behind
me I give way, on a white stallion, sits a thin woman, she looks
straight ahead and sees me not. Thorns from trees have scared
her face, blood drips like rose petals on her blouse. In the soft
underground I see no hooves mark. Legend has it an Englishwoman
had tried to cross the river a day when it was deep, horse and
human was never seen again. I know where they are, the stallion
is the whit crested wave that slam on to sandy shore and tried to
get a hoof hold, solid enough for the dolphin nearby to ride it.
If they succeed they will be able to ride east where dawn begins.
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