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For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

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Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: a river and a lake   a river and a lake Icon_minitimeMarch 22nd 2010, 9:24 am

A river and a Lake
Knee deep in succulent green grass the goats stand, olive trees around
look grey in comparison, when they see me they are weary, look at me
trying to guess my intention. Their eyes are full of sunlight.
I haven’t walked here for a long time, rain has seen to that. It is so quiet
deep inside this neglected landscape, nothing stirs, no birds fly and
clouds look glued to the sky. Perhaps I’m a ghost of my own past,
doomed to every forenoon to walk through here to where the track ends
and the mountains begin. A vague toll reaches me, the church bells of
Benafim. Another death as sunlight glints on coffin handles. A pair of
butterflies sit on a straw, I try to take a picture, but they will not pose
for me today and floats away. I meet an old woman, she’s collecting
firewood, has a bundle full, she looks up and says:” fine weather now
but it will rain tomorrow again” I agree, the lake, that disappeared years
ago, is full, but the rowboat by its shore is a skeleton. And the river,
where we used to swim long ago, is full too, it inanely runs to meet its
destiny. Yet, this year, though, it will carry enough water to keep us cool
through the summer months.
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