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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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Enemy of the People

Tonton Macute, papa doc’s henchmen, I saw them in action in 1968,
gunning down a boy who had stolen a packed of Chesterfield Cigarettes
from a cabin on our ship. They told him to run and shot him dead when
he did. They smoked cigarettes which I had given them and had whisky
breaths on their foul lips. Blood dripped into the green sea, each drop
screamed of injustice. No one came to pick him up before the morning
next day. Tonton Macute, like the mafia, will always be around and do
big businessĀ“s dirty work; while their victims vacuously pray to the same
gods as their torturers do.
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