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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Give Me A Verse   Give Me A Verse Icon_minitimeSeptember 15th 2008, 9:43 pm

Another game to get your lyric writing going. You'll have the title for a song and we want to see what you will do with it. When you finish your verse give another title for someone else.

This is a writing exercise but try to finish your song and if you do post it in the lyric section to let everyone see, and you never know it could still be the next big hit!


Your first title: Dancing Rainbows
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PostSubject: Re: Give Me A Verse   Give Me A Verse Icon_minitimeSeptember 26th 2008, 1:04 pm

Dancing Rainbows

Sometimes the storms are fierce,
I never thought we'd see the end,
It kills me to have to let you go,
I stand alone in this pouring rain,

Forlorn I walk the soaked earth,
The rain begins to cease its flow,
It hurts to have to let you go,
The clouds are slowly parting,

Then the colors light the sky on fire,
Bringing hope and peace,
I didn't think this would feel better,
But the rainbow speaks to me.


The sun is out and shining bright,
I feel like I'm a whole new man,
I still miss you every now and then,
But I know new things will come.


:P There's my attempt! Next title:

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