Chrome
Number of posts : 63 Age : 31 Location : Lahore, PK Registration date : 2008-08-26
| Subject: Inferno September 9th 2008, 6:59 am | |
| The sentences in the italics are whispered, not sung. --- Scatter the daemons There's a new world coming Hold the sunlight The moon shall bruise the skies A new world order has Come to life Murders, anguish Have caused this strife I will design my death I will cremate our love Fear the threat And care no more No hope for us In this world The pain is eternal. Like a conflagration. Giving me some pacification...Improvise your own destiny My tears are my necklace My darling You would never understand A new era is born Tonight Your lies and hate Have dimmed the light I will design my death I will cremate our love Fear the threat And care no more No hope for us In this world A sound so shallow. You barely heard the rasp. The tripping hour is long past...Time's a murmur I can never grasp The black hole of denial Has lasted too long A new me is been created From dust and heat Emptiness Has brought this feat I will design my death I will cremate our love Fear the threat And care no more No hope for us In this world | |
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: Inferno September 25th 2008, 1:14 am | |
| You have a wonderful way with words. I enjoyed the song, even though the mood is a bit depressing, leaving me thinking about things I'd rather not. I'm reading it as a rock - punk piece, is this your intention? | |
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Chrome
Number of posts : 63 Age : 31 Location : Lahore, PK Registration date : 2008-08-26
| Subject: Re: Inferno September 25th 2008, 5:08 am | |
| Thanks for the reply Kellycakes. ^^ Yes, I intended it to be punk-rock. That's not my usual genre as I write optimistic lyrics, but I randomly got thinking about dark themes and there it came down on the computer theme. | |
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Teele
Number of posts : 73 Age : 36 Location : Cold Lake, Alberta, Canada Registration date : 2008-09-24
| Subject: Re: Inferno September 25th 2008, 10:14 am | |
| Nice! Yup, I could imagine some grungy, dirt-laden guitar going on in the background with a pounding rhythm and some dude with a sinister voice doing the lyrics....this actually reminds me a bit of Opeth.
On the other hand, if I was given the song, I'd probably cast it in a minor key with a classical or acoustic guitar at first, and then kinda fill it up later with a nice tasty melodic solo....but that's just my style.
But yeah, great song! I should really give songwriting an honest try... | |
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