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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 18th 2008, 1:54 am

You know the drill. Add a sentence to the story, we will keep it going until the story comes to an end. Once the story ends we will start a new one. So lets get it started.


Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. Like a Star @ heaven
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart:
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad?
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?!
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 24th 2008, 6:17 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 10:13 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 25th 2008, 10:52 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 26th 2008, 11:38 am

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 28th 2008, 7:54 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 30th 2008, 3:42 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 30th 2008, 4:57 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap. And like the crap that floats on the top of the toilet water I was swirling around eventually going to be sucked down.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeJuly 31st 2008, 7:35 am

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap. And like the crap that floats on the top of the toilet water I was swirling around eventually going to be sucked down. Down to a world of eternal lonliness, to cry for myself forever.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap. And like the crap that floats on the top of the toilet water I was swirling around eventually going to be sucked down. Down to a world of eternal loneliness, to cry for myself forever. But today I was content to be out in the rain.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap. And like the crap that floats on the top of the toilet water I was swirling around eventually going to be sucked down. Down to a world of eternal loneliness, to cry for myself forever. But today I was content to be out in the rain.
The emotions I encountered previous was no longer a concern, things were starting to appear brighter.
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Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap. And like the crap that floats on the top of the toilet water I was swirling around eventually going to be sucked down. Down to a world of eternal loneliness, to cry for myself forever. But today I was content to be out in the rain.

The emotions I encountered previous was no longer a concern, things were starting to appear brighter. The sun was already breaking up the thin disorganized clouds.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeAugust 7th 2008, 2:19 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap. And like the crap that floats on the top of the toilet water I was swirling around eventually going to be sucked down. Down to a world of eternal loneliness, to cry for myself forever. But today I was content to be out in the rain.

The emotions I encountered previous was no longer a concern, things were starting to appear brighter. The sun was already breaking up the thin disorganized clouds. In the distance I could hear the birds singing.
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PostSubject: Re: Keeping it Going!   Keeping it Going! Icon_minitimeAugust 7th 2008, 2:40 pm

Although it was only noon the sky seem to blacken quickly. I didn't bother to go inside when it started to rain. The coolness was refreshing against my skin. I leaned my head back and enjoyed the rain drops on my face. They fell on my checks and forehead and lips like the tiny sweet, wet kisses of every loved one I'd ever lost. My throat tightens and my hands begin to sweat as I think back. I should have known the sadness would return when I thought about him. It wasn't that long ago when everything started to fall apart: How could I have let things get so bad? How was I even able to love someone like that?! Maybe my mom was right when she called me a loser. I should have listened to my high school Biology teacher when he said I would only be good for men's pleasure and capitalized on that. But I just didn't want to hear it. There have been a lot of things over the years I haven't wanted to hear. My parents gave me a lot of advice that I didn't care to abide by. Now my throbbing heart wishes my weary ears had listened to the countless lectures. But, alas, there is no undoing the past.

It was then, when I stood outside in the rain, that I noticed my life was just a piece of crap. And like the crap that floats on the top of the toilet water I was swirling around eventually going to be sucked down. Down to a world of eternal loneliness, to cry for myself forever. But today I was content to be out in the rain.

The emotions I encountered previous was no longer a concern, things were starting to appear brighter. The sun was already breaking up the thin disorganized clouds. In the distance I could hear the birds singing. The storms in life always pass and life carries on.
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