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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: Lyrical Collaboration   Lyrical Collaboration Icon_minitimeSeptember 15th 2008, 9:30 pm

Let's write songs together!

Like any craft or hobby, lyric writing needs to be practiced and practiced in order to perfect (if anything can be perfected.) So lets collaborate and create some lyrical genius. After one song is finished, we'll start another one! Are you up for a little practice?

This is the very basic form of lyric writing.

Verse 1
Chorus
Verse 2
Chorus
Verse 3
Chorus

So the first person who starts it off will write the first verse and the next will write the chorus. The chorus is then repeated throughout the song. Remember most great lyrics do not read well on paper so don't get too caught up in the flowery language and imagery. Depending on genre much of today's music uses real-life down to earth words. Or you can go the opposite way by using a poetic form, rhyming or non-rhyming. Another thing to remember is that each verse should have the same amount of lines in each.
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PostSubject: Re: Lyrical Collaboration   Lyrical Collaboration Icon_minitimeSeptember 30th 2008, 7:27 pm

No one wants to give this a try either?

I'll start us off then:

(V1)
Our love was indescribable
And I was your biggest fan
You left me, crying and hurt
I thought you were a real man


(Now the next person should come up with a chorus that will be repeated throughout the song.)
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PostSubject: Re: Lyrical Collaboration   Lyrical Collaboration Icon_minitimeSeptember 30th 2008, 7:29 pm

^Chorus^
Just get back where you belong
You are no longer needed
Just where they want you
I don't need you
^chorus end^
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PostSubject: Re: Lyrical Collaboration   Lyrical Collaboration Icon_minitimeOctober 12th 2008, 12:19 am

(V1)
Our love was indescribable
And I was your biggest fan
You left me, crying and hurt
I thought you were a real man

(Chorus)
Just get back where you belong
You are no longer needed
Just where they want you
I don't need you

(V2)
A real man you have never been
Just a man without the real
Loving you was just a sin
Never ever the same I feel

(Chorus)
Just get back where you belong
You are no longer needed
Just where they want you
I don't need you
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PostSubject: Re: Lyrical Collaboration   Lyrical Collaboration Icon_minitimeMarch 3rd 2009, 6:11 pm

(V1)
Our love was indescribable
And I was your biggest fan
You left me, crying and hurt
I thought you were a real man

(Chorus)
Just get back where you belong
You are no longer needed
Just where they want you
I don't need you

(V2)
A real man you have never been
Just a man without the real
Loving you was just a sin
Never ever the same I feel

(Chorus)
Just get back where you belong
You are no longer needed
Just where they want you
I don't need you

(V3)
You think you are a player
Well a player you shall be
Loving you was easy
But your love is a tragedy

(Chorus)
Just get back where you belong
You are no longer needed
Just where they want you
I don't need you


Well this song needs a little editing, and of course music, hey you never know we might have a hit on our hands. Nice work everyone. Now we can start a new song.
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