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Is the phrase "Once upon a time..."
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Monthly Writing Prompt
For this month's writing prompt write a scene using the following sentence to start;

The streets were deserted. Where was everyone? Where had they all gone?

Writing Tip
Our monthly writing tips are written by our very own TerishD. You can read more in Terish's Blog located in "The Abstractions" area of the forum.

Look Back

When not able to write ahead, it helps to look back. In my case I had written a paragraph ahead of the story. What I needed to do was add a section of exposition (talking) presenting some facts. In going back, I realized that I could insert a section where a 'tour' of the surroundings could be done. This allowed for character interaction, story development, and other things that enabled me to present the facts in an entertaining manner.

One should not face a writer's block with the mentality of bursting through it. I have found in my own experience that a writer's block is usually due to my mind indicating that it has a problem in 'channeling' the story. One reason might be a re-imagining of certain story points. Another reason however is that there is a problem in where you are at in the story, so you need to look back and find out the problem with the 'journey' that prevents the tale from advancing.

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PostSubject: I'll be there for you   I'll be there for you Icon_minitimeSeptember 1st 2008, 2:07 pm

Sometimes I see you all alone
Where will we go it is unknown
It's crazy but it's true
I know that you love me too

Sometimes our hearts beat along as one
We share our souls, you know it Hun
I know I want to share my life with you only

Thank you (Thank you), for loving me so much
Thank you for all the dreams we share together

(Chorus)
Do you know that I'll be there for you, forever there for you
There's no other girl I wanna be with
Can you see that I'll be there for you, always there for you
I'll be right here waiting whenever you need me

The thought of you keeps driving me crazy
I can go on just singin' this song
I still do believe that you're my destiny

Thank you (Thank you), for loving me so much
Thank you for all the dreams we share together

(Chorus)
Do you know that I'll be there for you, forever there for you
There's no other girl I wanna be with
Can you see that I'll be there for you, always there for you
I'll be right here waiting whenever you need me

What is love if not with you girl (What is love if not with you girl)
All that i do,is just for you (Just for you)
Baby it's true (Baby it's true)

(Chorus)
I'll be there for you, forever there for you
There's no other girl I wanna be with
Can you see that I'll be there for you, always there for you
I'll be right here waiting whenever you need me

(I love you)


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PostSubject: Re: I'll be there for you   I'll be there for you Icon_minitimeSeptember 2nd 2008, 3:57 am

I like it, love it actually. The 'I love you' at the end is a faded whisper? Won't work there if not. I can follow the melody in your head as you were writing this one. I don't have any constructive criticism, all seems well. Nice work!
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PostSubject: Re: I'll be there for you   I'll be there for you Icon_minitimeSeptember 2nd 2008, 3:59 am

I had the melody in my head and had to put a text to it immediately.

Yes the 'I love you' at the end is a faded whisper.
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PostSubject: Re: I'll be there for you   I'll be there for you Icon_minitimeSeptember 3rd 2008, 1:10 pm

I really like it. You must have had someone particular in mind when you were writing the lyrics, that emotion shows through very well. I think this would be a great for the country music genre.
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PostSubject: Re: I'll be there for you   I'll be there for you Icon_minitimeSeptember 4th 2008, 2:28 am

Yes I did. I wrote it for my wife.

Yes it could go in the country music genre, or the pop genre as well.

Thank you very much for the kind comment.
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