Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: I'll be there for you September 1st 2008, 2:07 pm | |
| Sometimes I see you all alone Where will we go it is unknown It's crazy but it's true I know that you love me too
Sometimes our hearts beat along as one We share our souls, you know it Hun I know I want to share my life with you only
Thank you (Thank you), for loving me so much Thank you for all the dreams we share together
(Chorus) Do you know that I'll be there for you, forever there for you There's no other girl I wanna be with Can you see that I'll be there for you, always there for you I'll be right here waiting whenever you need me
The thought of you keeps driving me crazy I can go on just singin' this song I still do believe that you're my destiny
Thank you (Thank you), for loving me so much Thank you for all the dreams we share together
(Chorus) Do you know that I'll be there for you, forever there for you There's no other girl I wanna be with Can you see that I'll be there for you, always there for you I'll be right here waiting whenever you need me
What is love if not with you girl (What is love if not with you girl) All that i do,is just for you (Just for you) Baby it's true (Baby it's true)
(Chorus) I'll be there for you, forever there for you There's no other girl I wanna be with Can you see that I'll be there for you, always there for you I'll be right here waiting whenever you need me
(I love you)
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Kellycakes
Number of posts : 1136 Age : 46 Location : State of Thankfulness! Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: I'll be there for you September 2nd 2008, 3:57 am | |
| I like it, love it actually. The 'I love you' at the end is a faded whisper? Won't work there if not. I can follow the melody in your head as you were writing this one. I don't have any constructive criticism, all seems well. Nice work! | |
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Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: I'll be there for you September 2nd 2008, 3:59 am | |
| I had the melody in my head and had to put a text to it immediately.
Yes the 'I love you' at the end is a faded whisper. | |
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Poet
Number of posts : 30 Registration date : 2008-08-18
| Subject: Re: I'll be there for you September 3rd 2008, 1:10 pm | |
| I really like it. You must have had someone particular in mind when you were writing the lyrics, that emotion shows through very well. I think this would be a great for the country music genre. | |
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Snacker
Number of posts : 818 Age : 39 Location : Stuck in Michigan Current Mood : Registration date : 2008-07-17
| Subject: Re: I'll be there for you September 4th 2008, 2:28 am | |
| Yes I did. I wrote it for my wife.
Yes it could go in the country music genre, or the pop genre as well.
Thank you very much for the kind comment. | |
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